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November 21, 2012
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I decided to take a closer look into anatomy as I have found myself to be winging it for all this time.
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Critique by ~FeatherfromHeL Nov 21, 2012, 1:36:08 PM
I like how you are praticing using real body muscles, instead of anime style muscles like from Dragon Ball Z. I also liked how you did your character's working progress in muscle gain. I would like to note that since you are doing kinda a cartoonish style for the head, it will be differcult for me to say things about the proportions. For example, if you have that size head for your character, your shoulders should be slightly broader and wider. In the halfway picture for Jack, his chest is really awkward to look at. Did he only work out his pectorials(his chest), and not his adomein(his stomach area)? The end result of your picture is quite good, there should be some definition of the shoulder line. It looks like he only has chest, then jump to arm joint. Keep working on it, and I am sure you will do just fine.
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~AuroraArt Nov 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice work!
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